Monday, April 14, 2014

Exercise 5.1

This exercise is all about finding the balance of voices in a rough draft. This exercise is all bout highlighting your whole draft with two different colors. one color to highlight your voice, and the other color to show sources and other voices. 

The color that dominated my paper was my own voice. That being said, my sources are not taking over my writing. I think that I used  a good balance of sources so that I don't rely too much on my own voice or on other peoples voices. All my sources are relevant to my paper.

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